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Mars's avatar

Based on what I read from you, I do think that this essay will benefit you. So just reminding you of it ;)

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Mars's avatar

We are from which we're made :) Perhaps the chaos and order we express is exactly what we're intended to do. I find myself to simply focus on alignment with my own essence is enough.

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🧿Merveye's avatar

WHAT THE FUCK ! I never use capital letters, so you might hear a faint scream reading this; that’s just showing we are on a similar frequency, because this is truly epic ánd a masterpiece. I haven’t read it fully, yet. And even though I like books - this is a book - I do want to make a suggestion, if I may? Because for people like us, who sometimes can’t read that much back to back (in my case, wish I could, but this damn screen I just can not fuck with. I might be getting old. Or ultra sensitive or something). So, what about giving each section its own post; that way, you’ll get more reach and it’s better readable. This is all just layout only changes. I’ll get back to reading it asap! Epic epic epic!!!✨✨✨

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Mars's avatar

Thank you 🥰 I've really considered separating it out and creating multiple pieces. Maybe I'll do that later, but when I created this I just needed to click publish... Because nerves.

And also there's only so much electricity that I have at a time, so it's rather frustrating to be broken up in my process.

Finally, this is also just me. I'm not a surface level dude, and I can't break myself up in parts. So... It didn't feel authentic. However I get that it will reach more people if I make it smaller, but yeah... Considerations lol 😂 I'm too good at overthinking, so it's better sometimes for me to just publish something. I'll keep your feedback in mind though :) maybe I am rushing things too much 🤔 still working on that.

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Peter Hartman's avatar

Yeah .. Good call to get it all out. I can and will take it a bit at a time. Posting in bits is good but link to the whole to keep context.

Good work, really good!

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Mars's avatar

Thank you 🙏 I appreciate your feedback 😊

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🧿Merveye's avatar

I didn’t mean to adjust your writing in any way, not in length or style or whatever, that’s your strength so I get it! But like suggested, keep this one and then additional posts with links to the Mother article like said here! 🤗🤗

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Mars's avatar

So I really sat with this, but I realized that I don't want to spam my posts overview on the app with multiple versions of what is just one essay (trust me, you'll know when I've written an actual book lol xD).

And I thought that Substack didn't have HTML anchor functionality, but it does! And now this essay has a Table of Contents with clickable links to those "chapters". I hope that helps :) Pretty sure it only works on desktop though - not in the app. But it's something...

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Hawtorn V. Rabot's avatar

I can't read this right now, as I have to teach, but I will return.

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Mars's avatar

I'll be patiently awaiting your return 😉

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🧿Merveye's avatar

Lol still teaching?

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Apapach-Arte's avatar

OMG… I am literally crying here. Every single thing you say here I have either thought or said or written about before. Every. Single. Thing.

And the tears are from the indescribable comfort that comes from gnowing (with as g, as in gnosis) that there is a human being out there who actually “gets me”.

Thank you so much for sharing this with me. The deepest of gratitudes. 🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️

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Mars's avatar

This is the reason I write, but I have to say it leaves me speechless to read this 🫣

It's so rare to experience true reflections isn't it? I'm really glad I could give this to you 🥰

And thank you for the beautiful comment ☺️

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Apapach-Arte's avatar

Yes, so very rare and precious to be seen and understood. Gracias, gracias, gracias 🙏🙏🙏

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Âxïŏm 🔥अक्सियम्'s avatar

And bridge the dual of individual whom are in divide. :)

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Âxïŏm 🔥अक्सियम्'s avatar

Here to make sense of the nonsensible

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Mars's avatar

And bring sense to the insensitive :)

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Justin Zimmer's avatar

A lot of this resonated with me (at least what my scan caught). Anima is a feminine word and I write a lot of female characters when I an expression aspects of my anima in story.

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Belle DreamCatcher's avatar

This is one of the most sanest thing I've read to be honest. It all makes perfect sense, I agree with everything. I'm very grateful that you wrote this. 🙏🏽

I've always been "weird" since I was a child. I got into spirituality young because I was looking for answers to explain how I felt. It's been a wonky path but I'm reconnecting more now.

It's an exciting time because a few people have begun to connect with the fairy realm which may exist here on earth in a different dimension. We're in fascinating times 💖

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Mars's avatar

It's time for the insane to rise 😉

I'd love to meet fairies and other mystical creatures. I don't see them myself, but with what I experienced, I can't deny it as a possibility either. There's been so much shifting in the aether this past 1-2 years, I truly have no clue what 10 years from now will look like. I'm still hoping for dragons 🤞

Anyway, I'm grateful that you took the time to read this 🙏 and that it helped bring sense to the nonsense we live in 😊

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Belle DreamCatcher's avatar

Dragons would be fab! I haven't seen fairies but I know when they are near.

I can easily read something like this, just that remembering of the sanity in this world, what's real and true. A memory popped into my head, maybe it'll resonate. I was working in a regular job once on a hospital ward. We had a plumber in and I needed to show him where to go. We were alone for a moment. He looked around and then at me and asked me if I was a spiritual person, and I said I was, but that no one here knew that. He emailed me his book. It reminds me now of your article. It was a remembering. It was so random, and I was so grateful. We need to remember, often, so the world doesn't make us forget.

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Mars's avatar

Absolutely. We all hold keys to make each other remember. It's why it's so important for us to express ourselves. Love your story, synchronicities also come in people shape 😄

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Belle DreamCatcher's avatar

That's so true! 💖

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Emma Liles's avatar

I was able to read about an 1/8th of this (which might not seem like a lot however that was my bandwidth) and I appreciated the perspective shared So Much.

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Mars's avatar

I'm so glad ☺️ I hope you'll find your way through the whole piece. It's not so much the conclusion, as it is the full experience of the essay that I believe is its true value. But then again, the beauty is that you will read something different than what I wrote. So I'm always curious and honored to hear how people interpret my work. Thank you for reading it as far as you have 🙏

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to be wild & free's avatar

Ahh, kindred being.

I leave you with these words...

Man in his ordering of things is a creature of chaos. The order by which the cosmos is governed, may seem chaotic to such a being that wishes to enact it's own form of order. Seamlessly reordering something that is already organised in turn, turns it to chaos in proportion to the rest.

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TheoSpirit's avatar

👍 I likee yo clip!

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Mars's avatar

Thanks 😎

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Ollie's avatar
Nov 7Edited

This is absolutely brilliant. I’m so glad I stumbled onto this essay. You so seamlessly tied together so much of what I exhaust myself thinking about.

Very nicely put.

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Mars's avatar

Thank you for the kind words and for restacking ❤️ honesty is another thing I touched on partially in my essay: honor & vulnerability. Curious about your term coherence though, do you have anything I can read about that?

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Ollie's avatar

Not explicitly, no; I should work on that.

But I think it’s a common theme for me that shows up here and tbh ere to varying degrees.

I’ll let you know when I write more directly about it.

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🧿Merveye's avatar

Damn I wrote a book, too 😅

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🧿Merveye's avatar

Also, fun fact, I just learned that it’s called ‘capital’, I thought and used the word ‘CAPTION’ multiple times 🫢🫢🫢😂😂😂 But now I know it’s CAPITAL 🤣🤣🤣 Okay peace out, read you later! ✨✨

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Mars's avatar

Hehe 😂 all good 😄 I'm really curious what you'll think once you reach the end :)

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🧿Merveye's avatar

I haven’t finished it yet, still love it! 🤗

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Becky Hayward's avatar

okay, coming back to this one. saved!

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